Questions I would answer for your manuscript:
. Did the story grip me from the very beginning? If not, why?
. Were some parts of the story confusing and why?
. What did I think about the setting?
. Were your characters authentic and could I relate to them?
. Was there a point where the story dragged? If yes, how can you improve it?
. Was the pacing and tempo of the story good?
. Did the dialogue sound natural to me?
. Was the ending satisfying?
. Does the writing style suit the genre/target audience?
What does Chapter-by-Chapter analysis include:
. Did this chapter have a particular purpose?
. How did the chapter fit the rest of the novel?
. Was the chapter engaging?
. Can you include/ remove something from it?
What does Character Analysis include:
/if you want me to analyze all your characters in-depth/
. Analyze the character arc and narrative function of each character;
. Suggesting possible improvements to make sure your characters are authentic;
Why choose me?:
. I promise to provide fast, honest, and detailed feedback;
. I promise extensive and in-depth line-edits throughout your whole work.
. I promise to provide affordable service;
. I promise to help you get one step closer to achieving your dream! :)